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Rumor walked her self to a tall oak tree for some shade."This is the life, I love it here, the birds, the trees, the shade, the slight breeze that comes and goes, lush grass, everything here is perfect!" Rumor nibbled at some of the emerald green grass, with some morning dew still on it, it tasted so good to her. The wind blew a slight breeze moving her tail, and her mowhoak still stiff a fluffy. She let her ears lay limp to the side of her head.

Rumor nodded off, the breeze still blowing, and the afternoon sun shinning down on her.Rumor drept about the says with her parents, and then it turned to the day when they died, blood everywhere, some on her face. For some reason Rumor couldn't awaken from this night mare, she shook her head, but it was no use. She did a soft neigh, refered to talking in your sleep.

After this whole ordeal, Rumor awoke, breathing heavely, trotting over to the water to drink something. as she walked she spotted a nearby horse, (Soy Soy's horse,Speed) She walked over to him/her and approached with caution, she nibbled at some of the grass that was taller than the others, as she looked up and saw the horse face to face with her.
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His ankle really wasn't bothering him. That much. He walked easily, no limp in sight. Though, underneath that fine, crimson pelt, bones and tendons were working. And near his ankle, they were straining. Trying to get him to walk correctly and painlessly, they caused more pain. It was like trying to stop a sinking boat. If you threw the water out, there was just more for it to come back in. You couldn't win, and neither could his hard-working muscles near his right fore. Still, he walked proud with his head held high, unscarred body strutting along like a King. Which, actually, he was. King of the lights; some accomplishment. When all he had been before was King of the losers. King of the broken racehorses, who couldn't even run anymore. Absolutely beaming, he high-stepped like a Saddlebred, letting all know that he was important, he held a high position of power.

Enjoying the sunlight, he paused. Something was different. His paper-thin nostrils diluted, inhaling an unfamiliar scent. It was a female, yes, but of what? Uneasily, he shifted his weight and cast a look around. Something wasn't right. She didn't seem bad, whoever she was, but you never knew. If only Speed could see her... she didn't smell, nor did being in her presence give him the impression, like a horse. A full-blooded equine. Could she perhaps be a donkey? Or a mule? Back at the racetrack, there had been a few of those, mostly teasers to get the mares ready to breed. But she didn't smell like either of them. Very cautious, he tossed his high-strung head, filled with a mostly-empty brain, and gave a high whinny. It was telling whoever was there that he was a tall, sixteen-point-two hand Thoroughbred, and he wasn't one to be messed with.

Then he saw her. Instantly, his second call that he was emitting faltered in mid-sentence, and he could only stare. She was the most peculiar, interesting, curious thing he had ever seen. Ebony stripes were going vertically down her otherwise spotless, ivory pelt in more than one places, but breaking up every now and then. He had never seen anything with such a pattern. Colt-like oaken eyes widened, looking at her forelock which was sticking up, and her mane. She definately wasn't a horse, but maybe something else? Not a donkey, that was for sure. Or a mule.
Taking a deep breath to steady himself, Speed decided to do his best not to be rude, but still find out what kind of animal she was.
"Lo, m'lady. I am Speed; King of Lights. Who--and what, if I may ask--would you be?"
He executed a half-bow, still precoppied with her stunning pattern.
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"I-i'm a 'zorse', as though people call it" Rumor said looking at the tall horse. "M-my name is Rumor, and may I ask yours, m'lord" She said bowing to him. "If I am I bother, I shall be on my way, but I do see that you have pain in your ankle, may I ask why?" She said, changing her sentence mid way.

Rumor looked at him, her soft striped nosebarely touch the ankle, she looked at it, and thought for a moment, "by the looks of the ankle, you must have been a race horse, am I right?" Rumor asked, blinking, and lfting her head back up and walking to the front of him.

As she walked she tripped over a 'pothole' and fell, she got up but felt quite embarresed, "oh clumsy me" she said, her hind leg had a sharp pain run through it as she neighed and reared, tossing her head, and coming down with a thud, not a threat to him though.

Rumor nipped at the leg and kicked it backwards, pain shooting through it. "Dorry about that, m'legs are weak from the walking, my parents died, and I've ran away so many times, that I'm warn out and tired" she said pawing the ground.
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